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Essentially, that’s what branding is all about. Why should I watch your 5 Tips for Writing Great
program? To justify my attention, you’ve got to be different from all the Email Newsletters.
others out there. We live in a culture where we don’t have much time,
and we have lots of choices. Make it simple for me. One of the most important elements of your email communications
is the subject line. Next to the “from” address, the subject line will
3. Give Me A Hook determine whether or not your email gets opened. Writing a great
Why should I respond to you or your message? What’s in it that makes subject line is no small challenge. You only have a few words to make
me want more? Why should I care? There are lots of preachers out it compelling, urgent, and specific—without sounding overly “salesy”
there – and some are preaching good messages, but few give me or misleading your readers. Here are some tips that will help you write
a reason to watch more. The old radio and TV serials invented the subject lines that get great results.
“cliff-hanger” – leaving the audience in suspense demanding to know
what happens in the next episode. What are you doing that makes the 1. Keep it Short and Sweet
audience want to come back next week? Creativity, cool graphics, and Do your best to keep your subject lines under 50 characters, including
hip clothes, are all good, but they won’t matter if you’re not sharing spaces, as most email clients display 50 characters or less. A recent
a message that hooks the viewer. Don’t forget that this is the key to study done by email monitoring company Return Path showed that,
response. If you don’t give them a reason to respond, they won’t. “subject lines with 49 or fewer characters had open rates 12.5% higher
than for those with 50 or more,” and that, “click-through rates for sub-
4. Unify Your Branding ject lines with 49 or fewer characters were 75% higher than for those
The vast majority of TV ministries have no brand at all, much less know with 50 or more.” Want to have better open and click-through rates?
how to unify it. Unifying your brand means that every expression of Keep it short and sweet!
your brand story needs to be expressed throughout everything you do.
From postcards, to the website, set design, architecture, social media, 2. Be Specific
look and feel of the TV program, and more, it all needs to tell the visual A vague subject line is a waste of real estate. A great example of this
story of who you are. Today, if I spread out the brochures, books, tapes, that I see often is monthly newsletters with subject lines like, “The
websites, and more from a typical TV ministry, it would look like they Green Thumb Newsletter: June 2007.” This tells the receiver nothing
each came from a different organization. Therefore, they all tell differ- about what they will find when they open the email and gives them
ent stories. But when you see anything from Starbucks, Apple, or Nike very little reason to do so. A better approach for a newsletter like this
– it all has a similar visual expression of their brand. Look at everything is, “The Green Thumb: 3 Tips for Summer Gardening.”
you do and make sure the brand story of you and/or your ministry is
told through it all. It doesn’t have to necessarily look the same, but it 3. Write it Last
needs to tell the same story. Many email marketing services (including Constant Contact) prompt
you to write your subject line first, as you are building your email. I
5. Raise The Bar encourage you to come back to it when you are done with your email
By now, most TV preachers reading this will say, “So what? I do all that content. It’s important to determine all the elements of your email
already.” Maybe, but I doubt it. But even if you are, your standards are first and then look for the most compelling topic to highlight in the
probably way too low. You need to realize the level of competition out subject line. When you are done with the body of your email, read it
there. In 1980, just about anybody could succeed on religious TV. Even over and pick the “nugget” that will entice your readers to learn more
Ernest had an audience. But today, it’s the Olympics on steroids when it by opening.
comes to finding an audience. It’s a tough world out there, so you need
to raise the bar in the level of content, differentiation, branding, and the 4. Take Some Time
reason they should respond. Make it better. Go deeper. Don’t just dash off your subject lines. Considering how important they
are, take some time to think about them and write several (3-4) before
NEWSLETTER choosing which one to use. Once you have a few subject lines you like,
run them by a friend or colleague and see which they think is most
THE SECRET FOR GETTING A RESPONSE compelling.
FROM EMAIL NEWSLETTERS
5. Test It!
Everyone sends out mass emails and newsletters these days, but the When you have two strong—yet different—subject lines, test them.
problem is, most get zero response. Years ago, Gail Goodman, CEO of Split your list in half and use a different subject line for each group.
Constant Contact, listed five important tips to writing effective subject After a number of tests like this, you will have a very good idea of what
lines in mass e-mails or newsletters. If you send out announcements, works for those on your list. And as always, the better you know your
e-mail newsletters, or mass e-mails of any sort, they’re worth consid- audience, the more effectively you can communicate with them.
ering: Getting the Subject Line Right!
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